[AERAS] AERAS Position paper

Dear AERAS partners, The AERAS position paper is now in the revision phase! We have 14 days to submit the revised manuscript. Any contribution to the revision will be valuable. See the journal's decision email below. Best, Pantelitsa Leonidou -- *Από:* International Journal of Information Security < pravin.selvakumar@springernature.com> *Στάλθηκε:* Κυριακή, 5 Νοεμβρίου 2023 13:48 *Προς:* Pantelitsa L. Leonidou *Θέμα:* International Journal of Information Security: Decision on your manuscript Ref: Submission ID 58c52d63-f031-440c-8251-a34dfa16e4c7 Decision: minor revision Dear Dr Leonidou, Your manuscript, "Cybersecurity Training and Healthcare: the AERAS Approach", has now been assessed. We invite you to revise your paper. When your revision is ready, please submit the updated manuscript and a point-to-point response if applicable. https://submission.springernature.com/submit-revision/58c52d63-f031-440c-825... 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Adherence to ethical standards: The paper explicitly addresses ethical considerations, such as obtaining participants' consent and ensuring data privacy. This demonstrates a commitment to conducting research with integrity. Implications for cybersecurity training: The study's findings have significant implications for the development of effective cybersecurity training programs in the healthcare sector. It highlights the need for tailored training that is practical and adaptable to individual organizations' requirements. ---- Platform implementation: The paper presents a comprehensive architecture for the AERAS platform, but it lacks discussion about the actual implementation of this platform. Readers might be interested in understanding the technical challenges, practical considerations, and potential barriers to implementing such a complex system. Some insights into the technical feasibility of the proposed architecture would be valuable. Attachments: • https://reviewer-feedback.springernature.com/download/attachment/ba5b89c0-7e... Reviewer 2 Overall, the paper is well written and the components comprising the overall architecture are described. The paper requires some language fixes and some figures could be improved (e.g., Fig5) While the authors describe the proposed architecture, they could emphasize more on the novelties provided for the Healthcare sector specifically (i.e., the key points that render this cyber range architecture superior to the existing ones for this application).